Wednesday, 7 December 2011
Thursday, 24 November 2011
The Script
1. INT: SABIRA'S ROOM DAY
Sabira and Kaylee two 15 year old school girls are sitting on Sabira's bed in her room you can see her lamp and desk,it is set in 2010.
Sabira and Kaylee two 15 year old school girls are sitting on Sabira's bed in her room you can see her lamp and desk,it is set in 2010.
Sabira
Yunno we should be going
sighs
sighs
Kaylee
Chill Sabby everything is going to be fine
Sabira
grr
sighs
sighs
2. LOCAL STREET EVENING
Sabira is walking down a dark Alleyway and hears someone behind her,the camera turns around to see noone is their,she is wearing a coat and boots.
Sabira
who's there?
shaky voice
shaky voice
3. INT: CHARACTERS ROOM DAY
Sabira is sleeping in her room,you can see her bed and desk and a small lamp,she awakes to a noise.
Sabira is sleeping in her room,you can see her bed and desk and a small lamp,she awakes to a noise.
(Sabira is sleeping and awake to a noise)
Sabira
who is there?
urgent voice
urgent voice
Camera follows her gaze into the corner of her room where something moves.
4. EXT: WINTER SNOWING
Sabira is walking down a street,in a coat,jeans and snow boots (tracking camera).
Sabira is walking down a street,in a coat,jeans and snow boots (tracking camera).
she see's footprints appear in the snow of her path.
Sabira
gasp
she stops and stares at them
Sabira
whats happening?why is this happening?......
5. INT: WALKING UP THE STAIRS IN HER ROOM.
Sabira is walking up the stairs to her room,when she gets stopped by her mum who asks if shes okay.
Sabira is walking up the stairs to her room,when she gets stopped by her mum who asks if shes okay.
Sabira's mum
Sabby
stern voice
Sabby
stern voice
Sabira
yes mother
Sabira's mum
Are you feeling okay you've hardly spoke today?
questioning gaze
questioning gaze
Sabira
I'm fine mother
sighs
sighs
Sabira's Mum
but you've hardly said anything....(she carries on but Sabira heads up the stairs)
6. EXT: SHES WALKING THROUGH AN ALLEYWAY WHEN SHE COMES ACROSS A WEIRD MAN(CLOSE UP)
Sabira is walking through an alleyway(in her coat and boots) when she comes across a tall boy in a black cape.
Sabira is walking through an alleyway(in her coat and boots) when she comes across a tall boy in a black cape.
Sabira
who are you?...what do you want?
The strange boy stares at her with a curious expression.
The man
wait..you can see me?
shocked expression
shocked expression
Sabira stares confused and shocked
sabira
what?,what do you mean can i see you?,obviously i can your standing right infront of me!
hands pointing towards the man
The man
wait this is,but if you can see me?..
sabira
if i can see you what?,your crazy!
shouts
the man
wait miss,come with me
sabira
what?,come with you are you mad
begins to walk away
the man
wait!
runs towards sabira and grabs her
sabira
get off me!
screams
the man
shush miss i will bring you to our world,everything will be fine
sabira
what do you mean get off me,get off me now i order you,you strange person
the man
but if i am strange then you are too
the man and sabira disappear into thin air,then the road is silent,a croak of a bird is all you hear
END
Thursday, 17 November 2011
camera shots
Script Layout
in the first scene of this uses a close up shot this helps people see everything that's happening and what hes doing clearly.
Also there are large range shots to get everything in the scene clearly.
my breakdown treatment
INT/EXT: Characters room (DAY)/Local Street (EVENING)
Ella is sitting in her room with her friends talking about school and gossip (Extremely wide shot)
Ella is laughing when she see's something move quickly outside(close up).
She asks her friends if they saw what she saw and they look at her weirdly.
(FLASH FORWARD TO OUTSIDE IN THE EVENING) Bella is walking down a long local street and is talking in her thoughts she's telling people about the things she sees that noone else can(tracking shot).
INT: characters room (DAY)
ella has just woken from her sleep and is confused as she see's shadow in the corner of her room. Startled she jumps and covers her mouth(close up shot) but then looks in the same place to see nothing.(camera follows her gaze)
EXT: (winter snowing)Ella is walking down her street its dark and she see's something moving (tracking camera)she begins to speak her thoughts of whats happening (close up shot to the ground).
INT: shes walking up the stairs (large shot) when her mum calls asking her whats wrong and she quickly reply's saying everything's fine.
EXT: Shes walking through an alleyway thinking when she comes across a weird man (close up)
Ella is sitting in her room with her friends talking about school and gossip (Extremely wide shot)
Ella is laughing when she see's something move quickly outside(close up).
She asks her friends if they saw what she saw and they look at her weirdly.
(FLASH FORWARD TO OUTSIDE IN THE EVENING) Bella is walking down a long local street and is talking in her thoughts she's telling people about the things she sees that noone else can(tracking shot).
INT: characters room (DAY)
ella has just woken from her sleep and is confused as she see's shadow in the corner of her room. Startled she jumps and covers her mouth(close up shot) but then looks in the same place to see nothing.(camera follows her gaze)
EXT: (winter snowing)Ella is walking down her street its dark and she see's something moving (tracking camera)she begins to speak her thoughts of whats happening (close up shot to the ground).
INT: shes walking up the stairs (large shot) when her mum calls asking her whats wrong and she quickly reply's saying everything's fine.
EXT: Shes walking through an alleyway thinking when she comes across a weird man (close up)
sarah jane adventures
In the script it has a similar camera shots to the film,it makes sure it captures each scene with the right camera shots.
In the script they have a lot of shots with fx (special effects),it also uses large camera shots to show everything that happens clearly and have close ups to view the characters face or facial expressions.
there are a lot of interesting angels in this film which shows everything clearly.
The script is good because its clear about what it wants each shot to do and how it wants each angel to be this makes it easier for directors.
Tuesday, 15 November 2011
more on proposal
How Celebritys affect teens and the way they think?
The Pros of this idea:
The Cons of this Idea:
Why picked the idea:
I thought it would be a good idea to give people a better understanding about how celebs change teens in their attitudes and way to life.
i think this will be a good idea to help more people understand.
most teens look up to celebs as rolemodels but some of them give a bad influence,to others.
What is the idea about:
This idea is about giving people a understanding on how celebs and their way to life can change teenagers.
and also how it encourages teenagers to find a rolemodel.
The Pros of this idea:
- So people will be inspired
- To get a message accross
- People might find this topic Interesting
- More Teens can be Motovated
- To give people a better veiw of celebrity
The Cons of this Idea:
- we might not have alot of money to make this documentary
- some people might find it pointless
- teenagers might disagree with this topic.
Why picked the idea:
I thought it would be a good idea to give people a better understanding about how celebs change teens in their attitudes and way to life.
i think this will be a good idea to help more people understand.
most teens look up to celebs as rolemodels but some of them give a bad influence,to others.
What is the idea about:
This idea is about giving people a understanding on how celebs and their way to life can change teenagers.
and also how it encourages teenagers to find a rolemodel.
Thursday, 10 November 2011
about a character in my short film
What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname?
Kaylee James
her nickname is 'kay'
How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?
shes 15 but turns 16
What is their date of birth?
21st December
What is their place of birth?
she was born in the same village as her best friend 'Sabira' (Coventry) Are they male or female?
Female Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
She lives in the same village and is a student at a school.
Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many?
she has an older brother who is 18 and a younger sister who is 13 years old
What is your character's overall health like?
healthy
What type of personality does your character have?
shes bubbly and loud one of the fun friends.
What is their Ethnic background and religion?
christian and some of her family are from America but she was born in CoventryWhat is their current occupation?
in school What level of education does your character have?
Shes quite smart but has blonde moments.
What does your character like or love?
she loves to spend time with her friends
What does your character dislike or hate?
she hates oranges
Facts about my main character:
What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname?
The Main Character of The Short Movie is A girl called Sabira and her nickname is 'Sabby'.
How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?
Sabira Is 15 throughout the movie.
She Was Born On the 31st of October (Halloween) Most People Find Her freaky.
What is their place of birth?
She Was born In a small village called Coventry most people see this town as a spooky place.
Are they male or female?
Female Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
They still live in there small village and she is a 15 year old girl who still goes to school.
Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many?
She has a smaller sister who is 5 years old.
What is your character's overall health like?
Shes healthy and sporty
What type of personality does your character have?
Shes quite shy and keeps herself to herself people see her as weird abit of an outsider.
What is their Ethnic background and religion?
What is their current occupation?
Shes in school.
What level of education does your character have?
Sabira is very smart.
What does your character like or love?
She loves reading books and cheerios
What does your character dislike or hate?
she hates mushrooms !
Thursday, 3 November 2011
Episode Break Down
We went through a Merlin scrip (MERLIN IV episode 3 Amendments)then watched the clip and saw that they say everything in a short amount of time Also they tend to improvise on what they say so not always keeping to the script.
this is the website the script is on:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/writersroom/2011/10/new_script_merlin_-_the_wicked.shtml
this is the website the script is on:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/writersroom/2011/10/new_script_merlin_-_the_wicked.shtml
Thursday, 20 October 2011
what ive learnt over the weeks!
Over the weeks Ive learnt about different ways and technique's on how to use a camera in different angels.
and we learnt about all the different kinds of genre's,we also designed a story by writing how each scene would be made and the settings.
Another thing we learnt about was 'mise en scene' is when arrangement of scenery and properties to represent the place where a play or movie is enacted.
Wednesday, 12 October 2011
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