INT/EXT: Characters room (DAY)/Local Street (EVENING)
Ella is sitting in her room with her friends talking about school and gossip (Extremely wide shot)
Ella is laughing when she see's something move quickly outside(close up).
She asks her friends if they saw what she saw and they look at her weirdly.
(FLASH FORWARD TO OUTSIDE IN THE EVENING) Bella is walking down a long local street and is talking in her thoughts she's telling people about the things she sees that noone else can(tracking shot).
INT: characters room (DAY)
ella has just woken from her sleep and is confused as she see's shadow in the corner of her room. Startled she jumps and covers her mouth(close up shot) but then looks in the same place to see nothing.(camera follows her gaze)
EXT: (winter snowing)Ella is walking down her street its dark and she see's something moving (tracking camera)she begins to speak her thoughts of whats happening (close up shot to the ground).
INT: shes walking up the stairs (large shot) when her mum calls asking her whats wrong and she quickly reply's saying everything's fine.
EXT: Shes walking through an alleyway thinking when she comes across a weird man (close up)
I like the fact you are using camera angles here Krystalle, your script is starting to take shape.
ReplyDeleteNext you need to add proper scene headings and descriptions of the appearance of your characters at the start of your scenes.
Following this you can start to work on dialogue.
This is really promising Krystalle, well done!