The Plot;
My story is a confusing fantasy its about a teenage girl who senses abnormal and immortal people and creatures.
the camera follows her around the town listening to her talking about these immortal people noone else can see.
people think shes crazy and ignore her but is what shes saying true?
Strange things begin to happen people go missing,people start getting weak is all this a coincidence?
in the start of the film she is sitting with her friends talking normally when she see' something out of the norm.
as she tries to explain her friends don't know what shes talking about they dont understand whats shes saying.
next shes walking through am alley way as she went for a walk when she bumps into a strange man he isn't like most people in fact hes immortal.
people begin to disappear e.g one of her close mates she tries to tell herself that he things she see's aint real but they are....
Some lovely ideas here Krystalle, think about your ending.
ReplyDeleteNext you need to break your treatment down into scenes. Each scene needs to have a heading like the headings you can see on my Blogger post.